This tutorial was focused on obtaining feedback from the tutor. I brought in my completed draft and found out several small issues in my report. One being I did not come up with the idea quick enough in the report, making the research look unrelated to my idea. Therefore I added extra lines to explain when I thought of my idea to improve the context of the research. Another issue was my titles not suiting the content I put underneath them, which was an easy fix. Also my Abstract did not fit into the report since it written as if the report was already done, when it is meant to be write as if I was only starting on the concept.
To further round out my report, I will need to work on creating a stronger conclusion. As my conclusion feels too brief and needs more explanation. Overall my report is coming along nicely and I will be working towards fixing the smaller issues before solving the larger ones.
Bibliography:
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